Greetings from the Critique Club -
I guess I will begin with the fact that this shot didnt work for me personally. I am still trying to figure out what it is - not that it being abstract had anything to do with my vote, I just didnt think it was an appealing abstract. The color blending and blur didnt leave enough detail to be interesting. The curved lines do give some sense of rhythm, but as a whole the shot just felt rather uninteresting. I am sorry that I can't really give any technical areas to improve or any other areas to critique. It is always good to get a new pic and score in your profile page. Shows that you are improving in your entries. Your two higher entries are very well done and Ilook forward to seeing your future improvement and growth at DPC.
Tim |
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