Good looking model, bad photo. I would definately take advantage at knowing a girl like this, drag her out and take some photos of her there if you don´t have studio access, make use of dusk and dawn and above all, dont take pictures of her for challenges with the built in flash. Just leads to unflattering ugly shadows and harsh lighting. You can do better :)
Very interesting theme and shot idea. Your execution can have a lot of improvement with ohter lights. If you need to use flash, try to give it less power througt FEC or to bounce it. In this case ceilling is low and you can reach a much better light. In any case use most possible ambient light.
Interesting concept and beautiful model, but lighting can be improved a lot. My guess is that you used a direct flash pointed at the model's face which what caused the blown highlights on the face and the hard shadows on the right arm. If you would've used indirect lights, this would've scored much better.. Still a good shot, I give it a 6.
wow.. that girl looks just like a girl i know! nice idea but i think the photo might have workedbetter if there was a solid background. why bother telling you this, boobshots always go high!
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