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05/14/2006 03:53:03 AMPost actions
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Greetings from the Critique Club...
Nice image for the Rhythm Challenge. Compositionally this works. What I might do next time is crop a bit tigher so you don't have that white space in the corner. In regards to the DOF, it looks good, however it appears you sharpened that area a bit too much especially the top of the key so I'd try and avoid that in the future.
Other than that there isn't much else I'd change. Maybe make the white keys whiter so they provide more contrast with the black keys.Message edited by author 2006-05-14 03:54:53.
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Comments Made During the Challenge
05/09/2006 01:26:29 PMPost actions
wonderful interpretaion of the theme! I wish your DOF was a little bit wider, but the one key certainly makes a statement. very nice!
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05/09/2006 07:57:38 AMPost actions
This is a better-done version of my challenge picture. Good work!
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05/08/2006 06:55:49 PMPost actions
very blurry too. next try and zoom out a lil more
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05/08/2006 12:47:42 PMPost actions
Nice composition. I'm seeing some zaggies. Perhaps oversharpened?
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05/07/2006 10:19:59 PMPost actions
very nice. I wonder if a lower angle would have helped. Either way, I like it.
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05/07/2006 12:14:26 AMPost actions
Cool title - why not G flat? Very limited dof in this shot, not sure if it helps or not.
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05/05/2006 10:05:30 PMPost actions
I like the idea of F# key f ocusing
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05/05/2006 09:09:32 PMPost actions
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05/05/2006 08:15:38 AMPost actions
cool maby try crop the 1st note out or use a larger f number
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05/05/2006 04:44:55 AMPost actions
Like the macro of the piano
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05/04/2006 02:03:46 PMPost actions
uha - good thinking, beautifuk picture :o)
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05/04/2006 01:57:20 PMPost actions
Of all the piano key shots, this is the best. Well done.
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05/04/2006 11:53:23 AMPost actions
I always love piano shots. I relaly like the angle at which this is taken.
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05/04/2006 11:45:36 AMPost actions
Best of the piano key shots yet.
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05/03/2006 03:57:30 PMPost actions
accentuated by its over-sharp edges
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05/03/2006 04:48:38 AMPost actions
personally would have preferred the focus on the first key and to see less of an angle to include more of the keyboard
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05/03/2006 03:54:24 AMPost actions
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05/03/2006 12:53:26 AMPost actions
Needs to be sharper, more in focus.
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