Nice idea. A simple improvements can made it a great picture.
1) Light, is dull and very harsh (it makes very defined light shadows definitions) and it hurts the message of pictures.
2) Scenary sugest a street case, then preserve it but adds to your composition capturing less wires, poles and commom elements. A simple crop tight can solve in many situations.
3) Movement. This scene has a lot of movement. I can saw that hand in low shutter speed. |