Thank you all for the comments.
Yes, I think if there's something out there this might work better but my face seem to block out the light. and i dunno what that spot was. I check my kitchen ceiling and didn't see anything.
Anyway, this being my second submission(desolation was the first attempt) I am pretty proud of the results. Thank you all. and keep the comments coming so I can improve.
Cute - though I think it might have been more engaging with something more colorful or detailed on the "outside". As it is, there's not a lot to hold my attention, though it's nicely focussed and lit.
You interior macro details are great, but the exterior is very plain and boring, and has that dark spot. This would be great with some exterior interest!
JD Anderson