This looks like's it's [i]already[/] in a newspaper, which I'm guessing was the effect you were going after. I like the composition, but the kids in the background take away from the main subjects.
great composition, that takes us to the golden 1960s-1970s era, but dirty image...you are a great photographer with great talent, but something is missing...camera? sensetivity? what?
This is a pretty good sports photo and I see your B&W treatment tries to mimmick the look of print. I appreciate it, but hope it doesn't hurt you in voting.