OK, here you go. I liked this one quite a bit though the girl's outfit and ponytails make her too cheery for the topic. Great job capturing natural color - the girl's shirt, brick, peeling paint, wall. I also like the textures - metal, wood, brick. The cropping seems a little tight at top and at right, to me. What I like most about this is the "layered" effect that draws my eye through the doorway, into the room, and through the window to the boards. You've captured a lot here without it being too busy or distracting. Hope this helps. I'm no pro.
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