This is sweet! I like the motion of water droplets and the way you singled out the one iris (blue flag?). Two elements detract from the whole: The one background flower at the left of the frame competes with the sharp one infront of it...if it were in shadow as much as the one at far right there would be better separation of the subject; the other detractor is the orange line...it just takes so much attention by its color and placement in the composition. I think a little time in photoshop could fix these objections of mine.
I think this is a good attempt but it does not quite make it. My eye wanders around too much, especially on the right side of the image where nothing is quite in focus.