First off, always try to include some info about the shot in the Photographer's Comments section. It really helps out, especially when you request a critique. You chose a great cliche here, and one that is out of the ordinary. As mentioned in earlier comments, the flash was much too harsh and really overexposed those oranges. You chose a nice composition and the layered oranges sever well to draw the viewer deeper and deeper into the frame. Toning that flash down a bit would have gotten this one a full point or more. I Would make suggestions on how, but I am not at all familiar with Canon equipment.
The coloring is too yellow in the whole photograph and the center orange is lacking all its shade and definition so it looks like just a big yellow circle.
never heard this saying.
on a different note the photo on its own doesnt really appeal to me. tsetup, lighting... something bothers me, a je ne sais quoi i guess.
I like the idea here, but you have some seriously blown colors here and a bit over-saturated. I'm not sure if it's an exposure issue or something that happened in post.