The depth of focus is entirely too shallow and is distracting. Try using a smaller aperture. As an alternative, move back from the subject to increase DOF and then crop in post process. A few may be put off by the non complementary colors, but they are passable.
This image has a number of items that I think keep it from scoring well. The image size is small, making it difficult to rate, the dominant colours are putple and green, which are not complementary based on colour theory and the overall DOF/focus (this last one may not be a factor but the size makes it look like the image is OOF). JMO
2 - Very hard pressed to find yellow here, but do like the concept and composition and colors, but they are not 'complementary'. Bigger would have also helped you.
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