I like this one better of the two portraits. The close up and the expression is great. The only thing that distracts is the one strand of hair that goes across her forehead. Really nice job.
This is another nice portrait, but IMO I preffer the other one for the model expression. Seems a bit forced here to me, but maybe it's just me. The one thing I preffer of this one is that the hair doen't distracts on the bottom left. Wonderful lighting in both portraits.
I like this close up better out of her two portraits. Nice work. The limited DOF works really well. What setup did you use for this shot? Ambient light, strobes, ??? Anyway, excellent work.