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A tiny bit blown out, but sexy lips...
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mm... i feel like having lemon now... if lips were more in focus, woulda been perfect
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Interesting composition but focus is off and lime(?) isn't very green due to flash from the left.
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I like the idea, but the DOF is too tight and composition too off center.
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nice idea. just think the lighting on the left is a bit harsh. otherwise, well done.
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I wish the lighting was more even.
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Yeah, nice work. Seems to be to much texture in the skin? Oversharpened maybe?
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The shallow DOF bothers me in this image. The left side of the photo is in sharp focus yet goes out of focal range as it moves to the right. The lighting is a bit harsh as well.
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should have used a lime but ill give you 8 for now because of a good composition and nice colors.
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Great idea and fantastic title. You didn't quite pull it off, little over flashed and looks soft. However I like the composition, colours, concept and title. You owe it to yourself to revisit this setup and nail it! 7
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This is a good idea but the focus appears to be on the back part of the lip while I feel it should be on the lime and front of the lips.
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Hmmm. sexy but needs more focused points
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looks a little heavy on the yellow, nice lips!
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Image seems to be a bit backfocused and the light seems a bit hard -- you might try a diffuser next time. Also I don't think I like the fact that her lips are cut off to the right. Still a good concept though.
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I like the idea you have here. For me, the lighting is too harsh and maybe that's why the fruit is more yello than green? JMO.
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I like this image. It is one of the better ones in this challenge. Perhaps a little too bright. IMHO it could be toned down a bit.
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My eye immediately goes to the washed out spot on the girls face and affords little regard for the actual subject in this photo... You have a long way to go. 4
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Nice concept. More DOF needed IMO
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Nice concept but out of focus.
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Half-way betweet lemon and lime. Lime would be good for the challenge conditions, but bad for idea recognition. I'd say, colour her lips purple and use lemon. Good highlights on the lips!
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I like the concept, but over sharped.
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the focus is not really good. instead of the theet the lips should be sharp
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Good concept but lighting needs a lotta work. If it's intentional, I'm sorry. JMHO.
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It is slightly out of focus... but great Idea and I like the title....
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concept and composition are quite good, but focus shpuldn't be on her teeth
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2 - Colors seem off, too close, skin texture detracts as does the reflection/glare, in my opinion.
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I wish this was in focus...it would have won
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