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Comments Made During the Challenge
05/02/2006 07:41:08 PMPost actions
The tomatos are very clear. Need more clarity on the can. Great colors.
05/02/2006 05:19:41 PMPost actions
05/02/2006 11:12:00 AMPost actions
good idea, some problems with focus.
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05/01/2006 05:57:00 PMPost actions
the colors are certainly complimentary but better focus on your subject is needed.
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05/01/2006 04:09:11 PMPost actions
This almosts works except it's not cropped nearly tight enough and is out of focus.
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05/01/2006 07:19:57 AMPost actions
Composition needs work. Didn't care for the straight line dividing the colors. Also focus was way too soft.
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04/30/2006 10:35:38 PMPost actions
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04/30/2006 09:11:09 PMPost actions
definitaley not healthy :)
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04/30/2006 06:56:36 PMPost actions
good idea, but the can is somewhat out of focus
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04/30/2006 05:21:51 PMPost actions
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04/30/2006 05:00:11 PMPost actions
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04/30/2006 04:43:26 PMPost actions
better focus on the beer would have been a great improvement
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04/30/2006 11:22:45 AMPost actions
I like the concept but the line between the colors make the photograph seem tilted.
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04/30/2006 08:46:15 AMPost actions
04/29/2006 09:19:44 PMPost actions
Good idea but out of focus. Also the line between red and green is not straight.
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04/29/2006 02:38:45 PMPost actions
wow... I am not on board with this image not really sharp at any point also seems out of scale
04/29/2006 01:41:47 PMPost actions
The image is not in focus :(
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04/29/2006 12:08:52 PMPost actions
The beer can focus appears to be a little soft. I like the original idea.
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04/29/2006 09:24:21 AMPost actions
the can is a bit out of focus and the dividing line could be completely vertical
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04/29/2006 02:14:43 AMPost actions
This could be better if it was in focus.
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04/29/2006 01:35:49 AMPost actions
definite focus problems...just doesn't work
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04/29/2006 12:45:45 AMPost actions
There is nothing wrong with your concept. It is a good idea. The technical execution of this image is its main fault. It lacks clarity and has some serious digital artifacting in the composition. Overall color and contrast are weak. You might consider shooting this from a different perspective, like from ground level or straight down from above with the red-green boundary absolutely horizotal or vertical in the frame. This is kind of a "snapshot" perspective.
I'm guessing you are not very experienced with image post processing. I don't know what editor you are using but you will want to learn as much as possible about it and use it to bring out the best in your pictures.
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04/29/2006 12:21:57 AMPost actions
focal issues hurt this ... it is oddly interesting though
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04/28/2006 04:31:18 PMPost actions
A bit blurry - sure complementary colours, though.
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04/28/2006 10:56:41 AMPost actions
04/27/2006 10:22:05 AMPost actions
Nice idea, but the lack of focus is very distracting>
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04/27/2006 04:34:34 AMPost actions
the picture has too many artifacts.
and beer is healthy, yea :)
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04/26/2006 10:59:55 PMPost actions
good shot
sharp focus would help a lot
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04/26/2006 10:39:27 PMPost actions
1 - Meets the Challenge mostly color-wise, but the concept, subjects and focus/quality, not holding my attention.
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04/26/2006 03:02:11 PMPost actions
The Grolsch... is a little blurry, but a good plan. 7
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04/26/2006 01:09:43 PMPost actions
Out of focus, center line is leaning, you can see the seams of the cardboard and object don't really relate to each other which does not help to show contrast to the viewer.
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04/26/2006 11:59:53 AMPost actions
Nice idea and good colours.
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04/26/2006 11:38:01 AMPost actions
would like to see the can in better focus
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04/26/2006 09:02:21 AMPost actions
DOF seems a little off and the reflections in the can are a little distracting.
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04/26/2006 06:48:32 AMPost actions
an out of focus photo of two unrelated things is what I see...sorry, this is poor
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