I see this is your second entry and already you are improving. Good work - keep it up.
This one is very interesting. What does the original look like? You might have gotten a few low votes due to people not knowing what it is. With something like this, try and compose your title in such a way that it adds a little bit of explanation.
There seems to be a lot of white in your photo. This tells me that the original was very dark. My suggestion - Take the original, make it B&W, Make it a bit lighter, bump up the contrast and then turn to negative.
I took this at the Nuerenburg zoo. My kids were playing in the big plaground there and I was just holdng my camera into the 30ft tube slide there and snapping pics blind. There is a girl in the pic getting ready to slide down. Bet she was shocked when the flash went off...lol.