Without any kind of photographer comments here, knowing techniques, your thoughts on the shot, what you were going for or anything, I really find it difficult to offer any kind of in-depth critique on your photo. Perhaps something to keep in mind in the future when requesting an in-depth critique.
This photo is a bit hard to follow. There is so much blurring that I am a bit disoriented. I assume this is a stained glass window, but I am not sure. Other than that the picture is crisp, well-framed, and an overall creative effort.
Neat idea, and great exposure. I think a tighter crop would have made this one better, getting rid of most of the top and most of the right hand side. Very well focused on the subject.