"Five Loaves Bakery" is a nice entry into the Window Framed challenge.
The image itself has a different subject which I think grabs attention. I really like your idea and think you have a great idea. The contrast between the green and the red also grabs attention and enhances the shot. Unfortunately the reflections that we can see in the glass take away from the overall image. Also I might have tried cropping it a little differently. I would have tried it tighter on the right side like on half way on the column. Also possibly cropped the pole on the left side out completely because it is distracting because of how uneven it looks.
Overall this was a great idea and I look forward to your future works!
I like the idea ,but the crop is very tight and may be more of the window wold of done well in this image ,the other thing is i can see your reflection in the window :)
A few things you could do to improve your image, one cropping in from the sides removing the silver frames, two adding more contrast, three blurring background object. I used the elliptical marquee tool, by pulling out a nice big circle then inversing it. Then I filled with black paint and blurred it to remove the sharp circle edge. Then you drop the opacity down to about 10%. Give you a better image. Also this helps the viewer focus on the subject.
Somehow this doesn´t seem as sharp as it could be other than that, very mediocre, I mean, it´s just a shop window and compared to the effort many others put into this challenge, this pales in comparison... 4 from me.
It doesn't really tell a story like it probably could...compositionally, you should think about drawing the viewer into the frame, leading their eye where it should go, and giving it something to rest on.
A polarizer could help to minimize your reflection that you got of yourself.
Very nice. I might have composed just a bit differently to include the rest of the basket handle, but that would be about the only change that I'd make. Great colors and crisp focus.
Nice colors and composition. Could you have zoomed back just a bit to see more of the framing window? the red and blue contrast nicely and I like the warm tones of the bread. The bread on the left looks just a bit soft. 6
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