The lighting on this one is very bland and flat. Looks almost like it was taken with too long of an exposure. Maybe the flash was too bright. At any rate, not a real high quality photo. Not a great interpretation of this challenge, especially with the televisions still on.
*laughs. Great idea. But here are a few tips that could perhaps help the quality of this image.
Firstly, If possible. I would have put the TVs on static and chosen a particular area of this 'office' to concentrate on. At the moment, it is just so full of stuff it's very distracting. Also, there is nothing the eye can rest on, i.e. a main subject.
Personally, I would have gotten rid of the chairs closest to you, stepped closer to the chair at the back, holding the camera for a portait shot; include the rubbed away area under the chair, whilst keeping the tv's [which are on the static snowy channel] at the top!
On top of that, the image quality is poor. Play around with contrast and saturation if possible =)