Interesting to do a critique on your image but it is difficult if you don't give us any information in your photographers comments. When we do a critique, we go past just the photographic result, that's what voters comments do. The critique looks at what you were trying to achieve, how you wanted it to look and what issues you had in getting the image captured and ready for voting.
First Impression - the most important one: Well done, love the framing and cropping to definately play the shot.
Composition: hard to do a not centred shot here, nice that you have cropped to the frame and better that they hang their knickers if a single frame.
Subject: Meets the challenge extremely well.
Technical (Colour and light): Here i felt it may be a little overcontrasted .. but I have no idea what you were after with this shot without your comments ...
To grow its vote?: Look at the comments you got .. this is a great shot ... every thinks something different ... not sure how to improve really.
Summary: Great shot .. nice to at least see it on your profiles front page.
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The lack of absolute symmetry bothers me here... if you're going to make a symmetrical composition, make it perfect! Interesting shadows and light, underwear is too small to make for an interesting composition.
I reallt, really like the toning and the framing here, but the composition is too busy. I can understand why you wanted to keep it all in, as it is a terrific building for photographing. I think a tighter crop would have improved this one a great deal. Maybe including the arch, but loosing the botom of the shot to leave the open window and panties in the lower left corner woudl work better.
This looks outstanding! What an amazing old window. The red/white underwear adds a different dimension to the shot - something interesting. Good luck. 8
This must get a ribbon! Love the detail and textures, made me smile.
As it was advanced editing perhaps could have cloned out the cable on this right...
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this one made me smile :) I'm not really fond about the framing of your photo, I think I might have made a square crop. (just the wood part of the building, withoud the pillars & balcony around). 7
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