"Here I am" is a nice addition into the Window Framed challenge.
This was a very interesting location with a great little face to grab our attention. The image feels natural, unfortunately the graffiti is there but that is something we cannot avoid sometimes.
The image does feel dark. I understand that more then likely you were working with natural light, which is impossible to control. The lighting takes away from the little girl. I think it was an interesting pavilion to take a shot at. I just wish there was a better placement of the girl because this is a really cute idea.
the lighting is a little flat, which is hard cause it is natural light (or looks to be), some contrast whould help the image over all and add some dynamics- (light and shadow)
I can see where you were aiming for the symmetry of the pavillion but having the subject so low in the photo creates an imbalance to me. Still, I rather like the idea!
The picture is overall too dark. The only brightness is a blown or overcast sky, which doesn't add a whole lot either. Her expression is nice, but I also feel she is being lost in the picture.
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