Thanks for all the comments. I also felt the focus was a bit off, but I sort of liked how it softened the colors (and the other angles I shot didn't have the same feel).
Indeed it does. Needs just a little more depth of field on the flower and the two ends of this picture could just be lopped off. There's quite a nice idea with the thrusting new bloom, but I don't think this picture succeeds in graphically supporting the text of the title.