I wasn't sure if I should do this critique but hey if you wanna get mad at me you know where I am...lol
OK just cause I shot the other side of the hospital did you have to do it directly on? Seriously yes you met the challenge well this time and yes there are right angles everywhere. The color is a little off and it is slightly dark near the bottom although I am pretty sure that is cause you took it close to sunset. Your composition is getting better keep on trying you are getting better.
Composition is very good. Tweaking with the contrast and brightness would help this picture. Very dark at the bottom and very bright at the top. Evening out the levels would improve the piece.
Sure this is a nice picture to look at, (they only distraction I would remove if possible is the people and the vehicles in the lower left corner.) Butt today is the day that the challenge difinition riules, and alothough there are many right angles on the building, I don't get one (or many) that "produce the strength of the image". The strength of the image as I see it comes from the gracefulness of the building, the angles that make it up do not stand out and blend in. Looking at the picture does not evoke the thought 'right angles'
Composition = 6
Challenge = 7
intellectually I know that's a right angle but perspective wise it's not
Technical = 6
Dark lack of contrast
Creativity =5
X2 Wow factor =5
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