Inclusion of other items not relevant to the subject is making this photo to busy. Another angle and zoom that would isolate Timmy and the swan would really help make the subject pop.
The post in the center doesn't help this. My reaction to this image would be better if there were more focus on Timmy and the Swan, and if the post and yard lamp were not in the picture. The positive (I'm not going to give you only negative critique!) is that you did a nice job of positioning Timmy and the Swan in the image - rule of thirds works here.