Whee Hoo! But....a cropping tighter into the subject would have been better--also cropping into his hair would have made a stronger impression--but---very nice!
I like the lighting overall and the mist effect. The model's expression doesn't seem to fit the scene somehow, at least in the most common interpretations I'd make of this setting. It will be interesting to read your notes afterwards.
There isn't much color to this... Granted, that is not a requirement, but I like color. I also think the image is a bit contrasty, or the lighting could be a little better.
Very *er* suggestive crop and light placement. If that is what you were going for, you definitely acheived it. I like the lines and the composition very much.