Cool image - I love the stance, facial expression and attire! The issue I have is the lighting, this pic is just too dark for me. That outfit is shouting for attention and it's being muted. Nice composition, good sharpness!
this is good. I was taking a long look at this and I wonder if a tight crop around the model's face would be a stronger photo? Just a thought, as I think this one is pretty as itself. nice work. 8