I think that overall it could have been better if on a differnt floor such as an old looking road. also the bit in the corner could ahve been cropped out.
Cute shoes, reminds me that we'd get in trouble for writing on them at school. Unfortunately carpet just never seems to make a nice background, buy a couple of neutral colored posterboards for future set-ups like this.
The light here is somewhat dull (lacking in intensity, not boring), and I don't like the shoes being cut off at the top of the frame. Also, that little bit of something in the upper right corner is distracting...more of it, or none, would have worked better IMO. Love the Chucky T's [and I'd say you still got 1000 more miles before that pair is totally spent :) ].
The toe is too close to the left edge. There's something to be cropped out of the upper right corner. Needs to be brighter, sharper, more contrast. As is, this looks like nothing more than a bad snapshot.
Good topic idea but lacking a bit in the execution. A different background and moving the item in the top righthand corner out of the way would help this to look less like an accidental shot of the first thin you saw. Looks slightly out of focus as well.
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