I'd have made this black and white or some duotone, to compensate for the yellowish tinge to the floor; it clashes a bit with the cleaner colour of the screen. Nice capture though
IMHO the screen by itself without the floor would have looked better (like on a plain backdrop). i really like the angle of the shot, but the additional squares on the floor turn this image into more of a jumble.
Don't like that you included the floor in the composition. Your eyes are lead from the top of the picture to the bottom. The top is B&W and the bottom is not completely B&W. Maybe with the current composition if the floor was change to completley B&W it would look nicer or cropped before the floor started.