This is a fun shot. It's a little grainy in the dark tones and might be a bit flat. Did you try boosting the contrast a little, maybe play with levels a touch to clean up the blacks? Just a thought. Good luck in the challenge.
I don't usually like comments or give them, but since candids are near and dear to my heart, I have decided to comment on every photo in this challenge.
It's an ok candid. More typically captured than not though. Pretty easy to get these types of candids. Could have also been family or friends, but even if it isn't, these types of candids are a bit too easy for me. Still a candid, but only worthy of a 5 vote from me.