I'm sorry that my 10 wasn't registered (I didn't get 20%, next time I'll pay attention) becouse really I think this is a great picture. I'm very surprising about its low score...I think it deserve a ribbon. Anyway, congrats for your originality!!
Nice idea for subject arrangement. Grainy high-contrast image might be artsy, but it just can't compensate for loss of image detail. More detail would be better.