Nice portrait, good composition.
Would like to see more neck and there is a very heavy influence of red on this image. I would like it more with the reds toned down. 6
Love the yellow/gold hues in this woman's headdress. It really compliments her smile and her skin. She has a lovely smile and this is a nice portrait. The biggest thing that is a detraction in this composition is that there is too much sheen on her skin. Sometimes it is hard to capture that warm glow of a person's skin and that is a challenge the photographer has to contend with. Perhaps diffusing the light source and scattering the light instead of a full force light shined upon the lady would cut down on the glare and bring out that warm glow of her skin tones. Also I think that the image is too closely cropped to her face. I think you could easily pull back a bit to include the curve of her neck and the show the full headdress such that it would compliment the portrait. Lastly, I think you could easily drop the thin yellow border for it really does nothing for the composition as a whole - in fact it is slightly detracting because it calls attention to the fact that the picture was cropped closer to her chin and the composition ends before it reaches that yellow border (her head appears to be floating above a thin black space that is a gap between her and the yellow border).