Hi! Here’s a comment from the Critique Club.
First Impression:
Fuzzy, nothing is in focus.
Composition:
I like the flower placement and the use of the mirror. Background on the left is a bit busy, I prefer the background on the right side. Nice colours in the flower. The mirror frame is a little distracting due to its angle.
Subject:
Meets the challenge
Technical:
f29 @ 10 sec? Did something move? You should have had lots of DOF. As I mentioned above, nothing was in focus. I would have preferred sharp petal/leaf detail. In your comments you didn’t mention if the soft look was intentional. You did use smart sharpen, so I’m not sure.
Summary:
Back at ya! Thanks for the Déjà vu II critique.
I liked you concept, I think the voting masses didn’t like the lack of detail
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