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The first thing I notice when I look upon the picture is this man's gaze. He has this penetrating gaze that just arrests you. You managed to capture that exceptionally well. As this is the yellow challenge this composition would have been better had the man been leaning on the yellow tractor instead of that off camera orange one. His stance is great, but I would have prefered it not to be obscuring the yellow tractor nor the grille of the tractor. As the viewer, let us see more of the tools of his trade - show us more don't obscure it. The face of this gentleman has lots of character and the composition would have more visual impact if it was taken as a middle portrait shot - mainly from the waist up so as to draw more focus onto the individual and even less on the surrounding background. |