Wow, I really like this! The lines are great and I like the idea. I think the image as a whole looks a little dull and pixlated though. Besides that great job!
I know, stupid nitpicking, but too bad you didn't have shorter hair. then you'd get your whole head in the square. not gonna mark you down for it mind you. :) neat idea, excellent crop. Pedro
not sure if it was intentional, but I really like the grainy old-magazine look of this. it looks like it might have been torn out of one of my dad's old Esquires or Lifes, except for your outfit. :)
On my screen, this foto looks like a grainy newsprint. I think I'd rather have the speckles toned down a bit. The foto shows some nice symmetry, but there is nothing too remarkable about it.