Hello from the Critique Club!
Well first of all, it's nice to see something risky than the usual 'safe' entries people usually enter. Taking the chance of a low score with something a little different is good, and you recieved a reasonable score this time, so congrats.
This image is neat, just not everyone's taste. I don't really know what to say that could help since you've most likely intended for it to turn out this way.
I would've liked perhaps that the two main people were in better focus while keeping the lively movements of the background characters, but that is a choice entirely up to you. I like how the image gives off a sense of movement and energy.
All in all this is quite an interesting shot and if you're happy with it than you've done your job. Keep experimenting! |