Ok I like this shot,but if you want it to be better then I would do as others recommended and use a reflector to highlight the face a bit more and also be able to expose it a littl e less so the highlights in he hair /sweater arent so hars...or maybe a little b&w action. Pose shadow light otherwise are great I just think highlights are a bit too hot
NICE. The shadow on her face and harsh lighting make for great contrast. This series is really nice and unexpected. The rosy pink of her top works well with all of the white of the sweater and the wall.
good pose, crop. lighting on the face is good - her right eye is a tad dark maybe, but that's ok. crop the top off - the white wall up there is destroying the composition - and she has to much light on the top of her head.