Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one: I'm generally not one to be harsh on photos, but this looks horrible. It was destroyed by the plastic wrap filter.
Composition: Boring, very boring. Although, I appreciate the complementary colors, the comp itself draws very little attention.
Subject: It's there, I suppose it's clear, but that's about it.
Technical (Color, focus, and light): Color is oversaturated. Focus is hindered by a bad choice in filters and lighting is flat.
To grow its vote?: Leave the artistic filters alone. Really. Voters here want to see photography, not, "Look what this filter can do."
Summary: I really don't like to sound mean in critiques, but this just appears to be something yellow you shot and "tried" to make it look better with filters.
Good concept. But your focus os not there and there is a great deal of artifact noise that could easily be helped witha program like Neatimage. I use the free version and it really helps this kind of shot. Good eye though - keep it up.
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