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I agree with the other comments, the composition could be helped by having the little girl looking at what is in her hands... this would help better convey a sense of "play". As it stands, the image itself could be helped with a better crop. By cropping out the bow and "wheelhouse" of the "ship", more focus would be placed on your subject. Since the girl and the "wheelhouse" dominate the image, they are both competing for the viewers attention. Also try playing around with levels to add more "pop" to the image. |