I really like the idea, but I think the key here is to give it more of a "WOW" factor. I think Thomas Jefferson said it best when he said, "What the fuck were you thinking?" Or was it Jimmy Carter?
Its a good idea but i think its time for a new camera. Your cell phone just didn't cut it for this shit. I also think that it would have done better if the legs were a little darker as in the other copy of this pictue. It didn't show as much of the distracting noise. But the idea was good. keep up the good work.
Interesting composition, but the combination of the noise in the image and the halo around the leg, feet and wood beam is very distracting for me. JMO.