This was really an experiment with a series of shots. I was working on getting a slightly grainy black & white background which to place the colour shots on.
Great shot and editing work. I am getting ready to shoot my first wedding this weekend for my sister. I love the layout and the progression of the shots. Really well done. Maybe making the outside borders of the 3 inside shots soft may have looked nice. Just a small maybe - this works great overall.
I like your layout. The only nitpic i would have is the white flowers behind the bride/groom are a little distracting. (but only a little :)) I think they will love this.
Creative and a fantastic souvenir for the newly weds. This has actually given me an idea on how to thank my model, Stephanie, for helping me out. I would have preferred that the image isn't cutting the arm of the grooom. Aside from that, I think it's a great composition.