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05/11/2016 02:12:44 AM |
Originally posted by tanguera:
Taking a walk through your great port. Love the fantastic notes you've provided. Nobody does that anymore. Quite the setup! |
Thank you. This shot was over a decade ago, now! It's a shame that nobody does that here anymore, but maybe I can bring it back ;) |
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05/10/2016 10:21:23 PM |
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Taking a walk through your great port. Love the fantastic notes you've provided. Nobody does that anymore. Quite the setup! |
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04/05/2006 05:21:35 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
First, let me say that I am not a professional or even a very good amature photographer, so you may want to take my comments with a grain of salt.
Meeting the Challenge: You did excellently here. You definitely captured the spirit of the original, paying attention to details such as the border.
Title: This is where you put your own spin on it. The title defines the image well, and the recently extinguished look made this tribute photo uniquely yours.
Composition / Color: You said you wanted to show the inner light of the matches, rather than making them look cold and dead. You definitely achieved your goal. The red glow is what makes this photo have a strong emotional impact, which, in my opinion, takes it further than the original.
I feel like maybe the matches should be a bit closer together and higher in the picture, as they were in the original. However, your version emphasizes the negative space more, which is a good contrast to the warmth of the matches. Also I can see how it would have been hard to crop it so that there is less space on the top.
Lighting: The smoke seems to overtake the matches just a little - maybe less light on the smoke would have helped this. But I don't feel that this detracted from your overall image.
Camera Work: As others have said, the left match is out of focus. Other than that, everything's amazing. I loved looking at the pictures of your setup and I am in awe at the time and effort you put into this.
Post Processing: You definitely got what you were going for. The blue-colored smoke definitely reminds us of the original while the black background provides perfect contrast.
Image Dimensions and Filesize: Filesize could have been a bit bigger but I don't notice anything where this is a problem.
Misc / My subjective thoughts: This is a very detail-oriented photo - one thing I noticed was the border. While in the same style as the original, the different color adds to the relative warmth of your photo.
I have to say, you did an amazing job. I think the strength of this image is in the emotional pull - the "heroic symbolism" you were going for is definitely what you got.
I hope this helps! Feel free to PM me if you have any questions. |
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03/31/2006 12:29:55 AM |
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This is awesome! Congratulations on your top 20 finish. |
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03/30/2006 09:21:03 PM |
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This is neat and what an afterglow! Bump. |
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03/30/2006 04:43:58 PM |
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The red in the match heads is what sets this composition apart from the other tributes to this image. |
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03/30/2006 01:09:42 PM |
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Good composition, color, smoke shapes. The glowing match heads are an especially nice touch. Beautiful. |
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03/28/2006 11:53:47 PM |
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excellent.........fantastic exposure |
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03/27/2006 12:22:34 PM |
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Cool, I love the glow on the matches, makes them seem very sinister :) 8 from me. |
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03/27/2006 06:53:54 AM |
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Another magic shot....."WOW" factor as well..... |
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03/26/2006 04:54:17 PM |
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Nicely exposed shot. I really like how you captured the Red glow. One nitpick, that the left most match isn't very much in focus. |
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03/26/2006 03:08:01 PM |
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another one of these magical! |
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03/25/2006 03:51:54 PM |
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03/24/2006 08:22:38 PM |
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The best of the "band of brothers" imitations. The glowing tips and the color of the smoke are very nice touches inthis shot. |
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03/24/2006 07:53:36 PM |
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The best of these tributes .. and they live on! |
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03/24/2006 05:37:31 PM |
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I like the red tips of the matches. Unfortunately the smoke doesn't seem to be coming from the matches but just in the background. Good job though. |
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03/24/2006 08:15:34 AM |
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you'd have to have great timing for this shot...well done |
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03/24/2006 06:42:20 AM |
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Better than the original IMO. |
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03/24/2006 02:44:15 AM |
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Nice! Good capture, with the tips still glowing. |
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