I do like how you played with this. Your title is interesting as well. I would have had the other two guys doing something, it would have made the pic more interesting. As is, it looks like a snapshot. The flame is neat and I love the rustic setting.
While it's true that a lot of people barbecue in their yard/garden, this area they're in looks wild enough to not convey that strongly to me. Also, I'm not sure what you did with the color in this but I don't care for it and it looks overly processed.