ahhh i had written a long set of comments here that didn't get submitted when i voted. i'll try to summarize, don't take brevity to be an insult, please, just don't feel like typing it all out again:
1) a shorter exposure would've been better, would've made the seconds hand look more "jittery" and reduced blur on the minute hand
2) the lighting should probably be reversed so you're highlighting the hands on the clock and reducing the flatness of the lighting there.
3) slight clockwise (no horrible pun intended) rotation of the image because it feels tilted right now.
4) i know you're probably getting hammered with "does not meet challenge" stuff right now and i admit that has affected my score slightly, but i made the above comments as generic technical suggestions to improve the image itself rather than its "appropriateness" for the challenge.