Overall I like this. It's definitely low key with good exposure and nice touch of color from the indoor lights but seems like maybe it's not straight in the frame.
really like the two light sources and differing warmths. Definitely adds depth to the image. I'm bothered by the tilt to the right. Its very slight but very pronounced due to the horizontal lines. The crop works for me. Might be more interesting with a person at the table. Technically well done.