The focus is to narrow and too forward here, everything from her ring back is OOF. Also the lighting is pretty harsh, a bounce source over to the right, even someting as simple a a sheet of white paper would provide modleing and smooth out the exposure. I like what I can see here, I just wish I could make out more of it.
I'm distracted by the almost-blown highlights on the fingers and the chiaroscuro, which I generally like. I think the harsh textures detract from the tender theme.
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