Everyone's comments really do help me with my images. I am constantly striving to become a better photographer. Creative criticism, good and bad, works well for me.
I would have taken the kids' photo, but they are my kids and I guess I'm a protective mom!
Good composition. I really like the mountain view in the background and the cropping is good. The only problem is too much light. It washes out a lot of the detail in the picture and makes the lines less clear. Also a second sooner and you wouldn't have to play hide and seek to see the kid getting on the bus.
Maybe this would have been better from a child's viewpoint or a closer angle? Seems a little ordinary with a sort of "snapshot" appeal. Colors seem a little dull. I hope this helps.
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