The blur is so distracting in this shot. The focus and the motion blur combine for something that almost is painful to look at. We used to joke about learning through osmosis - this composition idea was a really good one. You used good cropping and color - maybe a tripod would help?
I like the composition and the colors OF this image. Not real sure about the bluring effect here or the extent of it. It does however fit the dreaming or sleeping aspect.
Nice idea, but even purposeful camera shake blur doesn't work. Something in your image should be sharp. Alternatives would be camera flash (sharp) combined with camera movement (blur), or a filter with vaseline, etc.