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03/23/2006 12:40:07 PM |
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I might give this another try, perhaps, the set up is not awful to deal with. But I hope you all do understand about this focus thing...it's a bit tough when your dealing with the camera lense, the close up filter and then two different areas of the lense prescription....I think...course if the prescription was the same for both areas...they probably would not be bi-focals.....hmmmm. |
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03/23/2006 12:10:47 PM |
Hi! Here’s a comment from the Critique Club.
First Impression:
Busy! Eyes dropped to the large water drop front and centre, up to the dark area near the top, around to the left, back to the front water drop.
Composition:
I feel it’s too busy, with too much out of focus. The black areas on the screen are distracting in the bifocals as well as in the water drops. I like the colours.
My eyes kept following the glasses frame around, looking for what was in focus.
Subject:
Clever use of bifocals and feathers. Meets challenge. Speed voters may have had trouble!
Technical:
Find DOF too shallow. If you could have brought the frame and some water drops in focus, your picture would have really “popped”
Thanks for your comments describing what you did pre and post. Gives me a much better idea what your intentions were.
Sorry, I don’t understand your reference to RainX
Summary:
Congratulations on your 76% placement, and getting a score above your average.
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03/17/2006 06:43:32 PM |
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Very clever, I hope we find out how you did it. |
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03/17/2006 01:38:14 PM |
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03/17/2006 10:56:08 AM |
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Nice idea and pretty good execution. More DOF would be better so that the images in most of the drops are as sharp as the one in the foreground. |
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03/16/2006 11:39:27 PM |
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The drops, while not entriely in focus, creates texture and added layering to this beauty. Rimless glasses would have instantly made this a top notch image. Bumping up. |
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03/14/2006 09:50:59 PM |
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Nice take on the challenge - and definitely bifocals. |
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03/13/2006 08:57:21 PM |
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Wow..peacock eyes from heaven! |
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03/12/2006 10:46:05 PM |
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03/12/2006 08:59:29 PM |
Now this is a unique photograph. After you ribbon, you must explain what you did.
-Rick |
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03/12/2006 05:25:23 PM |
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This is clearly the most abstract of the challenge. Excellent way to show the bifocals and feathers without being like everone else. Nice job. |
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03/12/2006 12:14:06 PM |
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03/12/2006 11:27:26 AM |
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03/12/2006 09:47:26 AM |
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great job getting the reflections and beautiful result |
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03/12/2006 01:24:39 AM |
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Doesn't meet challenge. Interesting picture though. |
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03/12/2006 12:14:51 AM |
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nice, I hope people take the time to figure out its a feather behind the glasses |
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