Greetings from the Critique Club --
My main concern with this photo is that the subject is very difficult to discern. I'm all for abstract photography, but this looks like you were actually trying to frame a subject and just didn't quite do it. One suggestion would be to not have such a tight crop; this would allow the viewer to put the subject in perspective and see that it's a hot spring. It would also allow them to see the scale of the water burst.
On the right side of the photo, the detail, focus, and lighting are just excellent -- really exemplary. If the subject were better defined, this would make a much better photo.
Rob |