Ough, girl this age don't have hair like this and the shirt down to the belly in school... Is it some kind of US stereotype??? Sorry if the girl would have been closer to education and further from sex service this one would have been good.
not sure of this is a student or a teacher bit the shirt could have been a little higher than it is. other than that, great picture, the expression os fantastic. and the lighting works pretty well for the shirt being white. White usually washes out the picture.
nice idea, the lighting and focus on her face are great - I think I would have liked to see the apple in sharper focus as well, and maybe turned a little bit so that bad spot isn't showing. Certainly meets the challenge - good job :)
The apple is really out of focus and takes away from this shot; would have been better to put it in focus, and person in background less focused, or both focused. -4-
Very nice composition with great RGB colors and you captured a terrific expression. It is an appealing composition.
I will join the chorus of others pointing out that the out-of-focus apple in the subject's hand is a major distraction. Out-of-focus foreground generally does not work as well as out-of-focus background in most cases anyway but it is exceptionally distracting in this one because the apple is a major element in the composition.