I agree about the line. The profile is so very beautiful. I love the lips and chin and eyelashes and how everything seems so balanced, and the strand of hair across the cheek is a great touch.
The viewpoint is good. Even though I am looking up her nose. I like the editing job. The only thing that really just bothers me is the line from ceiling to wall. If you could get rid of that line then it would drastically improve this. What is she looking at by the way?