First one of these I seen with kids .. nice shot, but like one of the others similar your lady on the left has the weirdest look in her eyes .. ain't kids great to work with...
I like all the different expressions, particularly the eyes! Would like to see a bit more light on the left of the picture, but this is a good choice for a "square crop".
i like the idea you have here :) i think that some more lighting could be more flattering to your subjects, b/c the shot becomes darker to the left side...
Cute idea. Great title, but that tiger/zebra rug really distracts from those adorable faces. I'd love to see them on a solid white background and no shirts (but not nude - just put a towel around them and crop it so we can't see them). Nice lighting and those dark eyes are wonderful.